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Chapter Seven.
I admit I'm a bit unsure about this chapter.
It has some somewhat suggestive dialogue in it. I hope I'm not crossing any lines with it. As far as I can tell, even taking into consideration the ages of the characters, it's nothing you wouldn't see on Prime Time TV. I marked it as mature just in case. I'm not trying to cross lives. I just want my donkey boys to enjoy being donkeys
I'm hoping the end of the chapter isn't too cliched. I was a bit weary of posting it because of something I watched earlier in the day, although I did write this and had the idea for it well before. Still, I hope I'm not crossing a line.
I admit I'm a bit unsure about this chapter.
It has some somewhat suggestive dialogue in it. I hope I'm not crossing any lines with it. As far as I can tell, even taking into consideration the ages of the characters, it's nothing you wouldn't see on Prime Time TV. I marked it as mature just in case. I'm not trying to cross lives. I just want my donkey boys to enjoy being donkeys
I'm hoping the end of the chapter isn't too cliched. I was a bit weary of posting it because of something I watched earlier in the day, although I did write this and had the idea for it well before. Still, I hope I'm not crossing a line.
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I enjoyed this chapter, Rusty. I don't think it was overly suggestive. Language was rather strong for Disney, but since this technically isn't Disney, I have no problem with it. I admit, you've got me curious - are you still intending to sync this up with "Donkey in Human Clothing"? If so, you've definitely got me wondering how you'll manage it.
I had imagined that if the Coachman killed Kindra, it might be what caused the Blue Fairy to enlist Lampwick's help, but clearly, that's not happening here. I'll be eager to read the next part.
I had imagined that if the Coachman killed Kindra, it might be what caused the Blue Fairy to enlist Lampwick's help, but clearly, that's not happening here. I'll be eager to read the next part.